02 April 2011

Greetings from....

Day 2 of the PAD challenge. Prompt: a "postcard" poem.

Seems so long since I saw you
yet it was only yesterday. Arrived
safely, though so tired found it
hard to sleep. Bread so rough
but the air so fresh
and springwater so
cold. I miss you, still,
through all our goodbyes. Be
safe, be still, be mine,
ever, in haste to make the last post,
ever...

2 comments:

Anthony Khongsit said...

wonderful poem. loved it. its relates to my life so well...

MaryAnn McCarra-Fitzpatrick said...

Thanks so much for taking the time to comment; I really appreciate it!

MaryAnn