02 April 2011

Greetings from....

Day 2 of the PAD challenge. Prompt: a "postcard" poem.

Seems so long since I saw you
yet it was only yesterday. Arrived
safely, though so tired found it
hard to sleep. Bread so rough
but the air so fresh
and springwater so
cold. I miss you, still,
through all our goodbyes. Be
safe, be still, be mine,
ever, in haste to make the last post,


Anthony Khongsit said...

wonderful poem. loved it. its relates to my life so well...

MaryAnn McCarra-Fitzpatrick said...

Thanks so much for taking the time to comment; I really appreciate it!